Comments on: Letting Go, Chapter 1

By: marc

marc — Sun, 12 Jul 2009 16:18:33 +0000

Thanks for all the kind words, everyone! It really gets me hustling on the next chapter to know that people are looking forward to it. Hopefully it’ll be out within the week. I’m really eager to move this along, I’ve got some great stuff planned for future chapters. ^_^

Again, thanks for all the love!

By: fuji-masaki

fuji-masaki — Thu, 09 Jul 2009 20:31:52 +0000

There not a lot of fanfiction out there that really wants to make me cry, making me feel for the characters out there, and your managed to make me 3 times. I truly love it. When Trunks was at Gohan’s grave, the night terror he had and the mother-son moment really pulled my herat strings. im still wiping some tears away as i’m typing this lol ^_^. I’m really looking forward to read more of this in the future. Like Veronica said, its going to be an emotional rollercoaster and i’m holding on.
The way you writing down the details of the surroundings and the scenes has really made me want to push harder to finish and to improve my own chapters.This has inspire me to try to make mine better than it is now. I thank you for that. ^_~

I love it. and i can’t wait to read the next one, I want to see how Trunks will react when he finds out what Bulma did and I can’t wait to see Gohan popping up. looking forward to it Marc. :3

By: dyaoka

dyaoka — Wed, 08 Jul 2009 19:36:49 +0000

Oh. My. God!!! This is so good, I love the details and all the fleshed out characters. I can’t wait for the next chapter. :)

By: Veronica

Veronica — Wed, 08 Jul 2009 04:35:06 +0000

Ah, Marc :)

Congrats on posting the first chapter of your first DBZ fic! I expect good things from you! :)

I like a lot of the themes you touch on in this first installment and I’m looking forward to seeing how you’ll explore them in future chapters. While you may not be the first to write a Future-Trunks-goes-back-to-the-past fic, there are not many that are so well fleshed-out, with good descriptions, good pacing, and multi-dimensional characters.

I especially enjoyed Trunks’s interaction with the girl at the post office. He’s too cute for words. And the gravestone made me cry. LOTS of drama in this first chapter and something tells me this story will be quite the emotional rollercoaster :P I look forward to the ride and am honored to be named as your inspiration. But don’t sell yourself short–it’s all you.

Good job, my favorite fanboy =) Keep it up!