Comments on: The Broken Road, Chapter 14 http://gohanxtrunks.net/2009/07/09/the-broken-road-chapter-14/ A Tale of Two Princes Sun, 05 Sep 2010 05:24:36 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Mademoiselle http://gohanxtrunks.net/2009/07/09/the-broken-road-chapter-14/comment-page-1/#comment-1598 Mademoiselle Sat, 11 Jul 2009 22:51:24 +0000 http://gohanxtrunks.net/?p=4999#comment-1598 Beautifully written chapter <3. Its definitely a sad chapter but there are so many emotions that need to be untangelled, truths to be faced, and issues to be resolved. I think I can see what you're going to be doing with Gohan, and its breaking my heart *the angst*. I'm realy happy Trunks accepted that his breakup with Goten left him raw and its going to take time before he's whole again. And for Goten, I'm beginning to see him as a multidimensional character again^^. Kudos to him too for beginning to accept that his brother makes mistakes and hopefully coming to terms with his and Trunks friendship. You've got a knack for writing Vegeta. We don't see him too often, but when we do its memorable. So many things about the exchange made me happy. You can see his love for Trunks peeking through his stern exterior. I'm very happy that his accepted Trunks' sexuality as well as he did. There's a lot of wisdom in the exchange. At the same time, it was quite funny. The last paragraph in particular, the one about Sons and forgiveness, the whole thing was pure gold. Thanks for a great chapter!!! Beautifully written chapter <3. Its definitely a sad chapter but there are so many emotions that need to be untangelled, truths to be faced, and issues to be resolved. I think I can see what you're going to be doing with Gohan, and its breaking my heart *the angst*. I'm realy happy Trunks accepted that his breakup with Goten left him raw and its going to take time before he's whole again. And for Goten, I'm beginning to see him as a multidimensional character again^^. Kudos to him too for beginning to accept that his brother makes mistakes and hopefully coming to terms with his and Trunks friendship.

You've got a knack for writing Vegeta. We don't see him too often, but when we do its memorable. So many things about the exchange made me happy. You can see his love for Trunks peeking through his stern exterior. I'm very happy that his accepted Trunks' sexuality as well as he did. There's a lot of wisdom in the exchange. At the same time, it was quite funny. The last paragraph in particular, the one about Sons and forgiveness, the whole thing was pure gold.

Thanks for a great chapter!!!

]]> By: marc http://gohanxtrunks.net/2009/07/09/the-broken-road-chapter-14/comment-page-1/#comment-1596 marc Thu, 09 Jul 2009 23:11:24 +0000 http://gohanxtrunks.net/?p=4999#comment-1596 Ah, the elusive Chapter 14! Glad this is finally up, I know it gave you a tough time. What can I say? There's some good stuff here. I love the continuation of Vegeta's natural "domestication". He's moving along at a believable pace. I also love the Mirai Trunks / Mirai Gohan mention he gives. Vegeta's a great character for these revelations because he's so perceptive. I like the way Trunks relates himself to how Gohan felt post-Videl. It sets up for some good chemistry down the line. In fact, the only thing I don't like is that it's down the line and not right now! 15, chop chop! <3, marc Ah, the elusive Chapter 14! Glad this is finally up, I know it gave you a tough time.

What can I say? There’s some good stuff here. I love the continuation of Vegeta’s natural “domestication”. He’s moving along at a believable pace. I also love the Mirai Trunks / Mirai Gohan mention he gives. Vegeta’s a great character for these revelations because he’s so perceptive.

I like the way Trunks relates himself to how Gohan felt post-Videl. It sets up for some good chemistry down the line. In fact, the only thing I don’t like is that it’s down the line and not right now! 15, chop chop!

<3,
marc

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